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fearful fear

작성자 : shi***   ·   2015-03-16

Fearful Fear
Do you know about fear? Most people think that fear is a feeling we should not feel. However, that is wrong thought. Actually, we can't live without fear.
There are fear's good point and flaw. The good point is that fear also give us cold air. When you watch horror movie, you feel cold on your back. So it is good for summer. And it makes your sleepiness run away in your head.
The fear's flaw is that if we watch fearful movie too a lot, we can be violent. And the big fear could also be the factor of dieing by heart attack. So I will warn you some things.
First, you have to become calm for some fearful things. If you fear too much about one, some people will think you are so weak and you could be laughed at other people.
Second, don't see horror movies too much. After you watch horror movies, you should read calm books.
Last, Don't forget that there could be some accidents. Don't be in hysterics. You might have a heartattact if you are unhealthy at the moment.

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                                                   Fearful Fear
                      Do you know about fear? Most people think that fear is a feeling that we should not feel. However, that is a wrong thought. Actually, we can't live without fear. 
There are good points and flaws of it. The good point is that it gives us cold air. When you watch horror movies, you feel cold in your back. So, it is good for summer. Also, it makes your sleepiness run away from your head. The fear's flaw is that if we watch horror movies too a lot, we can be violent and the phobia could also be the factor of dying by heart attack. So, I will warn you some things. First, you have to become calm for some fearful things. If you fear too much about one, some people will think you are so weak and they will laugh at you. Second, don't watch horror movies too much. After you watch horror movies, you should read books to calm yourselfLastly, don't forget that some accidents might happen. So, don't get hysterical. You might have a heart attack if you are unhealthy at that moment.

*Hi, Julie! just always take note that we should always use articulators when pertaining to a certain noun. Anyway, this is a good homework as always. Good job!

--T. Sheena

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