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작성자 : min*** · 2015-03-16
Hi theacher!!!! I did my homework!!!!!
1.Ijoined a tennis club activity this year.-activity
2.I was engrossed in the subject..-subject
3.My favorite classmate is Hyeyeon...-classmate
4.I hope I'll get along my classmates here....-get along
1.Ijoined a tennis club activity this year.-activity
2.I was engrossed in the subject..-subject
3.My favorite classmate is Hyeyeon...-classmate
4.I hope I'll get along my classmates here....-get along
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Hi theacher!!!! I did my homework!!!!!
>> Hi teacher! I did my homework!
1.Ijoined a tennis club activity this year.-activity
>> Activity - I joined a tennis club this year.
(This is incorrect as to the word activity is unnecessary.)
2.I was engrossed in the subject..-subject
3.My favorite classmate is Hyeyeon...-classmate
4.I hope I'll get along with my classmates here....-get along
>> Hi teacher! I did my homework!
1.Ijoined a tennis club activity this year.-activity
>> Activity - I joined a tennis club this year.
(This is incorrect as to the word activity is unnecessary.)
2.I was engrossed in the subject..-subject
3.My favorite classmate is Hyeyeon...-classmate
4.I hope I'll get along with my classmates here....-get along