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작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-03-16

I went to sol beach. I went to a small water park. And we met my sisters frienimmie. And after we went to the water park, we met him.
His mother said lets eat dinner togeher, so we got ready. And he even made us chocolate dipped crakers. We also went in a hot tub with our clothes on.

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I went to sol beach.
>> I went to Sol beach.
I went to a small water park.
And we met my sisters frienimmie.
>> And we met my sister's frenemy.
And after we went to the water park, we met him.
>> After going to the water park, we met him.
His mother said lets eat dinner togeher, so we got ready.
>> His mother asked us to eat dinner together with them, so we got ready.
And he even made us chocolate dipped crakers.
>> And he even made us chocolate dipped crackers.
We also went in a hot tub with our clothes on.
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