DAINE: Write the sentence using these 5 words.

CORRECT:Write a sentence using these 5 words.

EXPLANATION: A/an is used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns.

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DAINE: 1.peek=I don't like to be a friend with peeking friends when we are testing.

CORRECT: I don't like to be friends with those who peek during a test.

EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased to describe what type of person you don???t want to be associated with.

But, if you???re referring to your friends then, we can change your sentence in this manner:

CORRECT:I don???t like it when my friends try to peek at my paper while we???re having a test.

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DAINE: 2.wonder=Iwonder when I go to sleep after. I think how can it be on tomarow?

CORRECT:I wonder what it will be like tomorrow before I go to sleep.

EXPLANATION:Be mindful of your word spacing. Also, your sentence is rephrased to indicate what you wonder about before adding the time it happens.

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DAINE: 3.yawn=I yawn when I go to sleep before time to go bad.

CORRECT:I yawn when I???m sleepy and then, I go to bed.

EXPLANATION:Be mindful of your spelling. Also, your sentence is rephrased to express your idea clearly.

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DAINE: 4.outside= Outside is very fun to me because there isa playgrownd.

CORRECT:Playing outside is very fun for me because there???s a playground.

EXPLANATION:Be mindful of your spelling. We added the verb ??¡Æplaying??¡¾ to mention what you do outside.

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DAINE: 5.flash= The flash is very scard to me because there is aflash.

CORRECT:The flash is very scary.

CORRECT:The flash scared me.

EXPLANATION:We made your sentence simpler. Avoid using the same word in one sentence. 

If you like, you can change the word ??¡Æflash??¡¾ into something that caused it.

Like this:

Lightning scares me because of the flash in the sky.

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Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework. You did well in expressing your ideas! Keep it up!

- Teacher Kate