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My favorite fruit
작성자 : shi*** · 2015-03-13
My favorite fruit
My favorite fruit is strawberry. Strawberries are sweet and small.
When I was little, I couldn't eat fruits because they were so big. But, now I can find that strawberries are small that we can eat it in one bite.
I really like strawberry because it is sweet and yummy. It is also healthy. When I needed some energy for some tests or competitions, I ate strawberry and became nicer.
And when I play, I eat strawberries with my friend. Most of my friends like strawberries. Strawberry is red colored and that makes me think meat. Some friends say that they can hear the strawberry's seed inthere mouth when they chew. They say it makes the think about fresh strawberries.
I really like strawberries. However, I should not eat only strawberries. That is the most important then anything. If we just eat strawberries, we can't get other fruit's vitamin.
My favorite fruit is strawberry. Strawberries are sweet and small.
When I was little, I couldn't eat fruits because they were so big. But, now I can find that strawberries are small that we can eat it in one bite.
I really like strawberry because it is sweet and yummy. It is also healthy. When I needed some energy for some tests or competitions, I ate strawberry and became nicer.
And when I play, I eat strawberries with my friend. Most of my friends like strawberries. Strawberry is red colored and that makes me think meat. Some friends say that they can hear the strawberry's seed inthere mouth when they chew. They say it makes the think about fresh strawberries.
I really like strawberries. However, I should not eat only strawberries. That is the most important then anything. If we just eat strawberries, we can't get other fruit's vitamin.
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My favorite fruit
My favorite fruit is strawberry. Strawberries are sweet and small.
When I was little, I couldn't eat fruits because they were so big. But, now I can find that strawberries are small that we can eat it in one bite.
I really like strawberry because it is sweet and yummy. It is also healthy. When I needed some energy for some tests or competitions (when?) , I ate strawberry and became nicer.And when I play, I eat strawberries with my friend. Most of my friends like strawberries. Strawberry is red colored and that makes me think meat. Some friends say that they can hear the strawberry's seed inthere mouth when they chew. They say it makes the think about fresh strawberries.
I really like strawberries. However, I should not eat only strawberries. That is the most important then anything. If we just eat strawberries, we can't get other fruit's vitamin.
My favorite fruit is strawberry. Strawberries are sweet and small.
When I was little, I couldn't eat fruits because they were so big. But, now I can find that strawberries are small that we can eat it in one bite.
I really like strawberry because it is sweet and yummy. It is also healthy. When I needed some energy for some tests or competitions (when?) , I ate strawberry and became nicer.
I really like strawberries. However, I should not eat only strawberries. That is the most important then anything. If we just eat strawberries, we can't get other fruit's vitamin.
My Favorite Fruit
My favorite fruit is strawberry. Strawberries are sweet and small. When I was little, I couldn't eat fruits because they were so big. But now, I found out that strawberries are so small that we can eat it in just one bite.
I really like it because it is sweet and yummy. It is also healthy. When I needed some energy for some tests or competitions before, I ate strawberries and felt better. When I play, I also eat strawberries with my friends. Most of my friends like strawberries. It is red colored and that makes me think it's meat. Some of my friends say that they can hear the seeds in there mouth when they chew it. They say it makes them think about fresh strawberries. However, I should not only eat strawberries. That is the most important thing than anything. If we just eat strawberries, we can't get other fruits' vitamins.