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작성자 : dan***   ·   2015-03-13

This is my answer to the homework in our class.

athlete(a person who trained to complete in sports)
ex.He is a better athlete than her.

disability(the condition of being unable perform as a consequence of physical mental unfitness)
ex.Helen keller is one of the most famous people with disabilities.

compete(compete for something; engage in a contest; measure onself against others)
ex.The atheletes all compete each other to win the medal.

sportsmanship(fairness in following the rules of the game or sports)
ex.Billy has a good sportsmanship.

Please check my answer to our homework and correct the wrong sentence or the wrong vocabulary.

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This is my answer tothe homework in our class.
CORRECT: This is my answer tomy class homework.


athlete (a person who trained to compete insports)
ex. He is a better athlete than her.

disability (thecondition of being unable perform as a consequence of physical mentalunfitness)
ex. Helen kelleris one of the most famous people with disabilities.
CORRECT: Helen Keller is one of the most famous people with disabilities.


compete (compete for something; engage in a contest;measure onself againstothers)

CORRECT: compete (compete for something; engage in acontest; measure oneself against others)
ex. Theatheletes all compete each other to win the medal.

CORRECT: ex. The athletes all compete each other towin the medal.


sportsmanship(fairness in following the rules ofthe game or sports)
ex. Billy has a good sportsmanship.

Pleasecheck my answer to our homework and correct the wrong sentence or thewrong vocabulary.


EXPLANATION: Some of the sentences were rephrased. Aproper noun begins with a capital letter. Please be careful with thespelling of words. It is advisable to double check your sentencesbefore your send your homework to avoid some misspelled word ortypographical error.


Hello Daniel!

Thank you for submitting you homework early today. Yougot only minor corrections and I am glad to see that your constructedsample sentences correctly.

Keep up the good work!


Sincerely,

Teacher Serene ^_^

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