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작성자 : seo***   ·   2015-03-12

When did he came? I didn't see him, he came out of nowhere.
My cat was on the tree! Everyone saw that with wide eyed.
This cupcake is made up with strawberries.
The gold necklace caught my eye.It was so beautiful.
I have to get that ring back!It's my mom's ring!!!

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When did he came? I didn't see him, he came out of nowhere.
>> When did he come? I didn't see him, he came out of nowhere.
My cat was on the tree! Everyone saw that with wide eyed.
>> My cat was on the tree! Everyone who saw it were wide eyed.
This cupcake is made up with strawberries.
>> This cupcake is made up of strawberries.
The gold necklace caught my eye. It was so beautiful.
>> The gold necklace caught my eye, it was so beautiful.
I have to get that ring back! It's my mom's ring!!!
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