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작성자 : dai***   ·   2015-03-12

missing=I don't like missing things.

early=I have to get up early when I go to my school.

meet=I like to meet my friends beacause it is fun to meet my friends.

dream=When I have a bad dreem I am very scared.

pretty=I think my mom is very pretty because I love my mom.

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DAINE: missing=I don't like missing things.

CORRECT: I don't like it when my things go missing.

EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased to give more details.

>>>

DAINE: early=I have to get up early when I go to my school.
*** CORRECT! GOOD JOB! ***

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DAINE: meet=I like to meet my friends beacause it is fun to meet my friends.
CORRECT: meet=I like to meet my friends because it's fun.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling. Also, your sentence is rephrased. Avoid using the same words/phrases in one sentence.

>>>

DAINE: dream=When I have a bad dreem I am very scared.
CORRECT: dream=When I have a bad dream, I am very scared.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling.

>>>


DAINE: pretty=I think my mom is very pretty because I love my mom.

*** CORRECT! GOOD JOB! ***

>>>

Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well in constructing your own sentences! Keep it up!

- Teacher Kate

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