ANDREW: today i went to inducement.
CORRECT: Today I went to (?)
EXPLANATION: Always capitalize the letter at the start of your sentence. The same goes for the pronoun ??¡ÆI??¡¾.
In your sentence, you used the verb ??¡Æwent??¡¾ so you should mention a place instead. But if you're talking about a technique that you learned then you change your sentence in this manner:
CORRECT: Today, I learned about inducement.
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ANDREW: imat my friend.
CORRECT: I met my friend.
EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling.
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ANDREW: my frined told me what to do and told me a rule.
CORRECT: My friend told me what to do and gave me a rule.
EXPLANATION: Avoid using the same words in a sentence.
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ANDREW: my new teacher told me how to do inducement.
CORRECT: My new teacher taught me how to induce someone.
EXPLANATION: ??¡ÆInducement??¡¾ is changed into its verb form ??¡Æinduce??¡¾
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ANDREW: then i fight with my ather friend.
CORRECT: I went against my other friend.
EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased. ??¡ÆWent against??¡¾ also means you fought or had a match with someone.
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ANDREW: i won the game.
CORRECT: I won the game.
ANDREW: i was happy.
CORRECT: I was happy.
EXPLANATION: The pronoun ??¡ÆI??¡¾ is always capitalized.
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ANDREW: so i did fight with mt friend.
CORRECT: So I went against my friend again.
EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased for consistency.
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ANDREW: but i lost the game.
CORRECT: But this time, I lost.
EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased to give a clear conclusion.
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ANDREW: anther peplo wanted to fight whith me but i lost again. but i like inducement.
CORRECT: Other people wanted to go against me but I lost again. Despite that, I still like the technique called ??¡Æinducement??¡¾.
EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling. Your sentence is rephrased to give more details.
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Hello, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework! Take note of the corrections and may it serve as your guide for your next composition.
Keep up the good work and take care always!
Always cheering you on,
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