We went to a furniture store on Saturday.
First, we went to an old furniture store in a shopping arcade.
But, there were cobwebs. The store was built in 1993.
I saw some old, white tiles in there.
Nobody would like to go in there.
The escalators weren't moving.
There were some incandescent lamps at the parking lot.
There was like abandoned mine.
We were so surprised and went out.
After that, we ran away in a hurry to the mall.

Note:
*Be careful of WORD SPELLING.
*Be consistent with the tense of verb.
*Use IN for months
*COBWEBS are the sticky thread made by a spider
*NOBODY means no person

Eric, please read again the corrected composition and compare it with the old one. Study the corrections made above and consider them when you make another composition. THUMBS UP for this composition! :) Thank you for exerting effort on this. See you tomorrow!:)