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Alice homework

작성자 : noh***   ·   2015-03-10

I watch froson
alaf,anna,elsa,cristof,prince
I watch harry porter
harry,girl,boy

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Hello,
 
   Alice, Thank you so much for doing your homewor. You improved a lot but make sure to study your spelling. Keep up the good work Alice.

QUESTION:
** What is/are your favorite story?
** Who is/are the characters in the story?


CORRECTION:

Alice: I watch froson.
Correct: I watched Frozen movie.

Alice: alaf,anna,elsa,cristof,prince
Correct: The characters are Olaf,Elsa,Cristof and the Prince.

Alice: I watch harry potter.
Correct: I watched Harry Potter movie.

Alice: harry,girl,boy
Correct: The chracters are Harry and his friends.


NOTE:

** Alice always remember that you need to capitalize the name.
     EXAMPLE:  Alice
                     Keren

****Thank you Alice.Good night and See you tomorrow.


~ Teacher Keren


 

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