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작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-03-10

Dear Makie.


How are you doing? I know it has been a long time but I just want to say hello.
I loved when I came to your house for your Bday party. And I also loved when you gave me a goodie bag, and a real live fish. With the things we had I liked trading our stuff, but afterwards my mom said no, so we couldn't. And I also liked when I went to your house agian and played Barbies.
Thank you for reading my letter

your best friend Claire

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Dear Makie.


How are you doing? I know it has been a long time but I just want to say hello.
I loved when I came to your house for your Bday party. And I also loved when you gave me a goodie bag, and a real live fish. With the things we had I liked trading our stuff, but afterwards my mom said no, so we couldn't. And I also liked when I went to your house agian and played Barbies.
Thank you for reading my letter

your best friend Claire

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Dear Makie,


    How are you doing? I know it has been a long time but I just want to say hello.
    I loved it when I came to your house for your b-day party. I also loved it when you gave me a goody bag, and a real live fish. About the things we used to do, I like trading our stuff, but after my mom said no, we can't do it anymore. I like when I went to your house again and played Barbie dolls.
Thank you for reading my letter.

                                                                               Your best friend,
                                                                               Claire

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