ANDREW: i like carrot beCAUSE CARRT IS YUMMY.BUT I DONT ILKE ONION,BECAUSE ONION IS VERY BAD,IT HAS SPIESY.ALSO I LIKE CABBAGE BECAUSE CABBAGE IS GOOD AT OUR BODY. THIS IS WHAT I LIKE.

Teacher's comment:
Before I correct your grammar, I'd like to advise you to avoid typing your composition in capital letters. This gives the impression that you're feeling a strong emotion at the time you were typing it, like anger or annoyance.

Now here are your corrections:

ANDREW: i like carrot beCAUSE CARRT IS YUMMY.

CORRECT: I like carrot because it's yummy.

EXPLANATION: The pronoun "I" is always capitalized. You can also use the pronoun "it" to refer to something you already mentioned in the sentence.

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ANDREW: BUT I DONT ILKE ONION,BECAUSE ONION IS VERY BAD,IT HAS SPIESY.

CORRECT: But I don't like onion because it tastes very bad and spicy.

EXPLANATION: Don't forget the apostrophe (') when you use contractions such as don't, doesn't, etc. Also, we added the word "taste" to specify what you hate about onions. Be mindful of your spelling as well.

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ANDREW: ALSO I LIKE CABBAGE BECAUSE CABBAGE IS GOOD AT OUR BODY.

CORRECT: I also like cabbage because it's good for our body.

EXPLANATION: Again, use the pronoun "it" to avoid redundancy. Also, the preposition "for" is used to "give the reason for something"

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ANDREW: THIS IS WHAT I LIKE.

CORRECT: This is what I like.

EXPLANATION: The sentence is correct. You just have to change it to small letters.

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Hello, Andrew! Thank you for submitting this composition! I'm happy to know the vegetables that you like. :D

Well then, I'll see you on Wednesday! Have a good night and take care always!

Always cheering you on,

Teacher Kate