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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2015-03-07

We can protect our nature with following things. First we have to use a cup when we brush our teeth because we can cut down our importatn water.Second we must not throw away garbage anywhere because cause our soil can't disposal plastic itself. Lastly we always have attention to the environment.

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We can protect our nature with following things.
> We can protect our nature by following these things.

Note: The better preposition to use is "by" instead of "with".
The preposition "by" is used to show the person or thing that does something.

First we have to use a cup when we brush our teeth because we can cut down our importatn water.
> First, we have to use a cup when we brush our teeth because we can cut down our water usage.

Second we must not throw away garbage anywhere because cause our soil can't disposal plastic itself.
> Second, we must not throw away garbage anywhere because the soil can't decompose plastic by itself.

Note: decompose is the better term to use in this sentence which means, to decay, or to cause something to decay.

Lastly we always have attention to the environment.
> Lastly, we should always pay attention to the environment.

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