2015/3/7/Sat.

I went to the lotte mall.
>> I went to Lotte mall.
My mom bought me a pancoat shirt that had a lamb on the shirt.
>> My mom bought me a pancoat shirt that has a lamb on it.
I really wanted to buy one of the pancoat shirts.
>> I really wanted to buy one pancoat shirt.
And I bought a mnster high doll, that I really wanted to buy.
>> I bought a Monster High doll, something I really wanted to buy.
I bought Veanus Mecflytrap doll.
>> I bought Venus McFlytrap doll.
my sister wanted to buy a katty meow doll, but it was too ixpensive.
>> My sister wanted to buy a Katty Meow doll, but it was too expensive.
And there was a toy that we searched on the internet and it was there.
>> There was a toy that we saw on the internet, it was there.
I was so happy. And that was when I got another monster high doll.
>> I was so happy when because I have another Monster High doll.

I went to Lotte mall.  My mom bought me a pancoat shirt that has a lamb on it. I really wanted to buy one of the pancoat shirts. I really wanted to buy one pancoat shirt. I bought a Monster High doll, something I really wanted to buy.  I bought Venus McFlytrap doll. My sister wanted to buy a Katty Meow doll, but it was too expensive. There was a toy that we saw on the internet, it was there. I was so happy when because I have another Monster High doll.