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작성자 : dai*** · 2015-03-06
Make a sentence using these five words.
1. teeth=I like to brush my teeth because It is very good to feel.
2. bleeding=I have a bleeding when I hurt.
3. wand=I lke to see a fairy whith the wand.
4.experience=I have a experience when I hurt my arm and leg
it ws very hurting.
1. teeth=I like to brush my teeth because It is very good to feel.
2. bleeding=I have a bleeding when I hurt.
3. wand=I lke to see a fairy whith the wand.
4.experience=I have a experience when I hurt my arm and leg
it ws very hurting.
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DAINE: 1. teeth=I like to brush my teeth because It is very good to feel.
CORRECT: 1. teeth= I like to brush my teeth because it feels very good.
EXPLANATION: Put a space after a punctuation mark or any symbol within a sentence. Also, your sentence is rephrased to express your idea clearly.
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DAINE: 2. bleeding=I have a bleeding when I hurt.
CORRECT: 2. bleeding= My finger was bleeding when I got hurt.
EXPLANATION: We added details to your sentence to be more specific.
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DAINE: 3. wand=I lke to see a fairy whith the wand.
CORRECT: 3. wand= I want to see a fairy with a wand.
EXPLANATION: We changed the word "like" to "want" to express your wish. Also, be mindful of your spelling and use a/an to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns.
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DAINE: 4. experience=I have a experience when I hurt my arm and leg
CORRECT: 4. experience= I experienced hurting my arm and leg.
EXPLANATION: "Experience" is used as a verb and we wrote it in the simple past tense to refer to what happened to you in the past. Remember, we use the present perfect tense (has/have + past participle) for something that started in the past and continues in the present.
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DAINE: It ws very hurting.
CORRECT: It hurt a lot.
CORRECT: It was very painful.
EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased. You can use the word "painful" to refer to how you felt.
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Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well in using these vocabulary words in your own sentence. I'm impressed with your ideas! Keep it up! :D
However, I noticed you forgot to make a sentence for the word "hate". Don't worry, we'll just have that on our class on Monday, okay?
I'll see you on our next class! Have a nice day and take care always!
Always cheering you on,
Teacher Kate
