My favorite hobby is reading books because it is beneficial. First, we will learn. Second, when I read books I feel comfortable. Third, I can concentrate and I feel happy. Reading books give for many good thing.1,give concentrate.2, learn many things.3,heart is comfortable. I think my favorite hobby is reading books.

Note: BENEFICIAL means helpful or useful. Reading books is beneficial. CONCENTRATE is a verb to replace your word concentration.

Erin, read again your composition above with corrections. Take note of the words BENEFICIAL and CONCENTRATE used in the composition. Anyway, good job! Thank you for submitting your homework!:) Enjoy your weekend.