'Not feeling well'
I experienced many disease and cold. *Cold is also a disease. >> I have experienced many diseases.
But I will pick one of my experiences because it will be to long and boring when I write about normarl and light diseases experience.
>> But, I will just pick one of my experiences because it will be too long and boring if I will even write the common ones.
I was 2 or 3 grade, and I was very young. I couldn't remember well.
>> When I was in 2nd or 3rd grade, I couldn't remember well.
>> When I was a 2nd or 3rd grader, I couldn't remember well.
Me and my family went to ashley, which is restaurant, and ate many delicious foods an
d deserts!
>> My family and I went to Ashley, which is a restaurant and ate many delicious food and desserts.
And I ate brown chocolate ice cream.
>> I ate brown chocolate ice cream.
After that, my family and I went back to home, and did some things, and get ready to sleep.
>> After that, my family and I went back home, did some things and prepared to sleep.
And, my sister said her stomach hurts.
>> When suddenly my sister said her stomach hurts.
My sister's stomach was weaker than mine, so I didn't care about it.
>> My sister's stomach is weaker than mine, so I didn't care about it.
But, I waked up at midnight, because my stomach was strange.
>> But, I woke up at midnight because my stomach was feeling strange.
So I get out of my sleeping place and try to nausea because I had feeling I will vomit.
>> So, I got up from bed/get out of my room because I felt nauseous/I had a feeling that I will vomit.
And, when I keep one's eye open, I was vomiting.
>> Keeping one of my eyes open, I saw myself vomiting.
And my dad waked, and he all cleaned my remains(yuck!) and we both get back to sleep.
>> Then, my dad woke up and he cleaned all my vomit (yuck!) and we both went/got back to sleep.
In the morning, it turned out my sister had vomit too.
>> In the morning, it turned out my sister had vomited,too.
And my family tried to figure out the reason.
>> So, my family tried to figure out the reason.
And we concluded that it was because of asheley's brown chocolate ice cream.
>> Then, we concluded that it was because of the Ashley's brown chocolate ice cream.
Because the color of vomit was.. brown..(sorry to tell you gross story..)
>> Because, the color of the vomit was brown. Sorry to tell you the gross story.
And, after that time, I always try to scan the ice creams' condition before I eat.
>> After what happened, I always try to check the ice cream's condition first before I eat it.
CORRECTED COMPOSITION:
I have experienced many diseases. But, I will just pick one of my experiences because it will be too long and boring if I will even write the common ones. When I was in 2nd or 3rd grade, I couldn't remember well. My family and I went to Ashley, which is a restaurant and ate many delicious food and desserts. I ate brown chocolate ice cream. After that, my family and I went back home, did some things and prepared to sleep. When suddenly my sister said her stomach hurts. My sister's stomach is weaker than mine, so I didn't care about it. But, I woke up at midnight because my stomach was feeling strange. So, I got up from bed/get out of my room because I felt nauseous/I had a feeling that I will vomit. Keeping one of my eyes open, I saw myself vomiting. Then, my dad woke upand he cleaned all my vomit (yuck!) and we both went/got back to sleep. In the morning, it turned out my sister had vomited,too. So, my family tried to figure out the reason. Then, we concluded that it was because of the Ashley's brown chocolate ice cream. Because, the color of the vomit was brown. Sorry to tell you the gross story. After what happened, I always try to check the ice cream's condition first before I eat it.