Hi Edward, thank you for doing and submitting your homework.

1.Every person has a responsibility for he[or she]s job.
Correct: Every person has a responsibility to his/her job.
>> We use his/her  to indicate ownership.

2.When someone gets a crime that person is gilty.
Correct: When someone gets a crime that person is guilty.
>> watch out for the correct spelling of the word.

3.If someone gets a crime that person has to get punished.
Correct: If someone committed a crime that person has to get punished.
>>Committed means involved in a plan of action.

4.Fine is a kind of a punishment.
Correct: Giving fine is a kind of punishment.

5.When a person is is gilty, somtimes the person has to get community servise.
Correct: When a person is guilty, sometimes the person has to do community service.
>> Be careful with your spelling next time.