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My daily experience(Thursday)

작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-03-05

Today was the fourth day of 6th grade. I got up at 6:20, and I did Kumon(It's like a home - school material.). I ate breakfast, too. It was good. Then I prepared to go to school.And I went to school. I was not late but also not early. I read a book before the class begins. The book's title is 'Black Fox'. It was interesting. Then we had election for our class. Then we painted 'smiling faces'. And we studied science and social studies.
We had lunch. Then we studied English(It was easy.). And went back home.

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Today was the fourth day of 6th grade.
> Today is my fourth day in 6th grade.


I got up at 6:20, and I did Kumon(It's like a home - school material.).
> I got up at 6:20 and did Kumon (it's like a home - school material). or
> I got up at 6:20 and did Kumon. It's like a home - school material.


I ate breakfast, too. It was good.
> Correct!


Then I prepared to go to school.And I went to school.
> Then I prepared to go to school and left after I finished.


I was not late but also not early.
> I?arrived on time.


I read a book before the class begins.
> I read a book before the class began.


The book's title is 'Black Fox'. It was interesting.


> Correct!

Then we had election for our class.
> Then we had the election for the officers of the class.


Then we painted 'smiling faces'.
> Correct!


And we studied science and social studies.
> We also studied science and social studies.

We had lunch. Then we studied English(It was easy.).
> We had lunch. Then we studied English(it was easy). or
> We had lunch. Then we studied English. It was easy.


And went back home.
> Then I went back home.

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