It's spring.(Although it is cold)I became 6th grade. It was exciting but nervous. Fortunately, our teacher is kind. My mother said first empression is very important. So I tried to have etiquette. Now we are the highest grade in our school.
Then, we went to hall to see entrance ceremony and gave presents to 1st grades. We named our team. Then we wrote homework diary. And we went to home.(First day we don't eat breakfast.)
Yesterday was a first day of school and fun day.

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It's spring but it's still cold.  I'm in the sixth grade now. It was exciting but  nerve-racking. Fortunately, we met our new teacher and she's kind. My mother said to me " First impression is important", so I tried to have etiquette.  Now we are in the highest grade in our school. Then we went to the hall to see entrance ceremony and gave presents to  the 1st grader.  We named our team. Then we wrote our homework diary. After that, we went home. We didn't eat breakfast. Yesterday was the first day of school and it was a fun day.


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