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작성자 : one*** · 2015-03-03
Xylitol pervent tooth-dacay.So is better than candies.
2.fruits
We ate candies for dessert or snack.We can eat fruits for dessert or snack.
And fruits is good for health.So is better than candies.
답변
1.Xylitol gum
Xylitol prevent tooth-dacay.So [1]is better than candies.
2.fruits
We ate [2] candies for dessert or snack.[3]We can eat fruits for dessert or snack.And fruits is [4]good for health.So is [5]better than candies.
[1] It is better than candies.
>> use "prono un" /it/ to substitute/replace the subject XYLITOL
[2] We eat candies...
>>facts or things in general are always in the PRESENT TENSE.
[3] But we can eat fruits for dissert or snacks, instead.
>> use "but.." to contradict previous statement.
>> "instead" to replace something else
[4] Fruits are ..,.
>> subject-verb agreement, fruits are plural it should be followed by "are" not "is".
[5] It is better ..
>> this is correct, if you used "it" pronoun to talk about "fruits"
Fruits are better ...
>> subject-verb agreement, fruits are plural it should be followed by "are" not "is".
Hello,
Thank you so much for doing your homework Justine.
I thought you completely forgot about this. Good job on your answers. But kindly review my corrections especially about subject-verb agreement.
Have a nice evening.
T.Marie