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Do you belive the result of career test?
작성자 : shi*** · 2015-03-02
Today at classtime, I saw a career test. My dream is the Secretery General of UN. I thought of my skills and character, then answered the questions.
After all, It waid that I am the person who could be a Secrretery General of UN! I was surprised that this result was same as my dream. However, Can we really believe the result of career test?
Actually, we can belive the result if you answer the guestions truely. Some people says that the answer they are giving is true. But you have to give the trueth of your deep mind. The skills and characters are also a big cause that change your dream completely. When you can't stop your character that always brag till you grow up, you can't be a nice people infront of others. So if you want to change the result, you have work hard.
Caution!! You can't only rely to your result of career test. There are a lot of people who has same careers in the world . If they get the same resultwith you, You have to work hard to win. Even though the test result had said you can be a great people, if you be lazy, that means you are a loser!
After all, It waid that I am the person who could be a Secrretery General of UN! I was surprised that this result was same as my dream. However, Can we really believe the result of career test?
Actually, we can belive the result if you answer the guestions truely. Some people says that the answer they are giving is true. But you have to give the trueth of your deep mind. The skills and characters are also a big cause that change your dream completely. When you can't stop your character that always brag till you grow up, you can't be a nice people infront of others. So if you want to change the result, you have work hard.
Caution!! You can't only rely to your result of career test. There are a lot of people who has same careers in the world . If they get the same resultwith you, You have to work hard to win. Even though the test result had said you can be a great people, if you be lazy, that means you are a loser!
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Today at classtime, I saw a career test.
>> During the class today, I had a career test.
My dream is the Secretery General of UN.
>> My dream is to be the secretary general of UN.
I thought of my skills and character, then answered the questions.
After all, It waid that I am the person who could be a Secrretery General of UN!
>> In the end, it says that I am the type of person that could be a secretary general of UN!
I was surprised that this result was same as my dream.
>> I was surprised that the result is the same as my dream.
However, Can we really believe the result of career test?
>> However, can we really rely on the result of the career test?
Actually, we can belive the result if you answer the guestions truely.
>> Actually, the result is reliable only when you answered the questions honestly
Some people says that the answer they are giving is true.
>> Some poeple say that the results are true.
But you have to give the trueth of your deep mind.
>> But you have to be honest with your opinion.
The skills and characters are also a big cause that change your dream completely.
>> Your skills and characteristic are also big factors that could change your dreams completely.
When you can't stop your character that always brag till you grow up, you can't be a nice people infront of others.
>> When you can't control your character that loves to brag until you grow up, you won't be able to be nice in front of others.
So if you want to change the result, you have work hard.
>> So if you want to change the result, you'll have to work hard.
Caution!! You can't only rely to your result of career test.
>> Caution! You can't just rely on the result of the career test.
There are a lot of people who has same careers in the world.
>> There are a lot of people with the same career in the world.
If they get the same resultwith you, You have to work hard to win.
>> If they get the same result as you, you'll have to work hard to win.
Even though the test result had said you can be a great people, if you be lazy, that means you are a loser!>> Even though the test result will say that you can be great someday, if you are lazy, that means you are a loser!
>> During the class today, I had a career test.
My dream is the Secretery General of UN.
>> My dream is to be the secretary general of UN.
I thought of my skills and character, then answered the questions.
After all, It waid that I am the person who could be a Secrretery General of UN!
>> In the end, it says that I am the type of person that could be a secretary general of UN!
I was surprised that this result was same as my dream.
>> I was surprised that the result is the same as my dream.
However, Can we really believe the result of career test?
>> However, can we really rely on the result of the career test?
Actually, we can belive the result if you answer the guestions truely.
>> Actually, the result is reliable only when you answered the questions honestly
Some people says that the answer they are giving is true.
>> Some poeple say that the results are true.
But you have to give the trueth of your deep mind.
>> But you have to be honest with your opinion.
The skills and characters are also a big cause that change your dream completely.
>> Your skills and characteristic are also big factors that could change your dreams completely.
When you can't stop your character that always brag till you grow up, you can't be a nice people infront of others.
>> When you can't control your character that loves to brag until you grow up, you won't be able to be nice in front of others.
So if you want to change the result, you have work hard.
>> So if you want to change the result, you'll have to work hard.
Caution!! You can't only rely to your result of career test.
>> Caution! You can't just rely on the result of the career test.
There are a lot of people who has same careers in the world.
>> There are a lot of people with the same career in the world.
If they get the same resultwith you, You have to work hard to win.
>> If they get the same result as you, you'll have to work hard to win.
Even though the test result had said you can be a great people, if you be lazy, that means you are a loser!>> Even though the test result will say that you can be great someday, if you are lazy, that means you are a loser!