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작성자 : kok***   ·   2015-03-02

today was the first day of the fifth-grade!!
my teachers was scred classes air was very cold too.
I don't know my new friends but i take one's courage, and say 'Hello'
to my friend .I want my new friends are have a good feeling to me.
I beecome intimate only one friend.
I have to come up to my other friend.
I'm excited my fifth-grade class~

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today was the first day of the fifth-grade!!
>> Today is my first day on fifth grade!
my teachers was scred classes air was very cold too.
>> My teachers are scary and the class atmosphere was cold.
I don't know my new friends but i take one's courage, and say 'Hello'
to my friend .I want my new friends are have a good feeling to me.
>> I don't know my new classmates yet but I took courage and said 'hello' to them. I want my new classmates to have a good impression of me.
I beecome intimate only one friend.
>> I became intimate to just one person.
I have to come up to my other friend.
>> I need to have more friends.
I'm excited my fifth-grade class~
>> My fifth grade class is exciting.
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