**CORRECTED COMPOSITION**
candy:HEY! Boy don't eat so much cany?! Huh? I,m ask you a question.
boy:Why?
candy:Because your teeth will get dirty.
boy:Oh, fine I'll try.
candy:Hey, aren't you the same boy as what my brother the vacumm cleaner?
boy:yeah! your the brother of the vacumm cleaner.
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You:
candy:HEY! Boy don't eat so much cany?! Huh? I,m ask you a question.
Correct:
Candy: Hey! Boy, Are you eating a lot of candies? I am asking you a question.
*Candy is used as a name so it should start in capital letter. Punctuation marks are used to show strong feelings or emotions so no need to capitalized the word "hey". When calling a name put a comma after the name then your sentence. Next, the sentence that you used is not in question form, your sentences need to be rephrased.
You:
candy:Because your teeth will get dirty.
Correct:
Candy: Because you will have cavities.
*Teeth don't get dirty, they get cavities.
You:
candy:Hey, aren't you the same boy as what my brother the vacumm cleaner?
*The sentences can't be understood. You need to rephrase you sentence.
You:
boy:yeah! your the brother of the vacumm cleaner.
*The vacuum cleaner doesn't have a brother, maybe you mean to say is that the boy who vacuum's has a brother.