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Assignment from Teacher Cindy

작성자 : nar***   ·   2015-02-26

I have to prepare things that I do prior to a vacation trip

When I go to vacation trip, there are something preparation as below

At first, I have to plan where to go. I think it is the most important to assign the destination to stay the acation, because according to place to go for the vacation, Everything will be changed such as a trevelling expenses, a person who i am going to spend time wiith and ect.

Secondly, I should consider who I am going with. If I spend the vacation with my boyfirend I don't need to make plans for it hardly. because I will let him make plan for fun our vacation besides It is possible that I just advise whether his plan is good or not and give advices that he decides good plan.

Lastly, I have to think how much i will pay for my trip broadly. When it comes to the travel, money is also very important. If we don't have enough money on my trevel, we might undergo inconvinent experiences, so we should keep a trevelling expenses not to spoil a vacation trip.

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I have to prepare things that I do prior to a vacation trip
>> I have to prepare of some things prior to going on a vacation.

When I go to vacation trip, there are something preparation as below.
>> When I go on a vacation, these are the things that I prepare.

At first, I have to plan where to go.
>> First, I have to figur out where to go.
I think it is the most important to assign the destination to stay the acation, because according to place to go for the vacation, Everything will be changed such as a trevelling expenses, a person who i am going to spend time wiith and ect.
>> I think it is important to think of a destination for the vacation because everything such as the travelling expenses, my companion, etc. will depend on where I will go.

Secondly, I should consider who I am going with.
>> Second, I should consider who to go with.
If I spend the vacation with my boyfirend I don't need to make plans for it hardly.
because I will let him make plan for fun our vacation besides
It is possible that I just advise whether his plan is good or not and give advices that he decides good plan.
>> If I would spend the vacation with my boyfriends, I don't need to plan it in detail. I would let my boyfriend plan everything and just confirm if I like his ideas or not. If not, he would have to come up with a better plan.

Lastly, I have to think how much i will pay for my trip broadly.
>> Last, I have to seriously think of the expenses.
When it comes to the travel, money is also very important.
>> When it comes to travelling, money is very important.
If we don't have enough money on my trevel, we might undergo inconvinent experiences, so we should keep a trevelling expenses not to spoil a vacation trip.
>> If we don't have enough money during your trip, we might experience some inconvinience so we should plan our budget to not spoil the vacation.

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