Nicole's homework

¤±Diary about my dream vacation¤±
Today, I didn't busy because I didn't have any private educational institute, school class.
So, I went to the picnic with my friends after allowed from my mom.
I called to friend to ask.
fortunately, all of my friends said yes.
and I told "bring something to eat" to my freinds.
We meet at 2p.m. then whet to the park to spread a mat.
We ate some snakes and drinks, grilled marshmallow and played tennis.
I was so happy to play with my friends. We promised that play one more time before part each other.
I returned home and went to bed
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OMG ,I think I didn't understand my homework when you hand over homework to me.

Correct:

I'm not busy today because I don't have any private educational institute class. So, I asked my mom's permission to go picnic with my friends. I called my friends to ask and fortunately, all of them said "Yes". I told them to bring something to eat and we met at 2p.m then went to the park to set the mat. We ate some snacks and drinks, grilled marshmallow and played tennis. I was so happy playing with my friends. We promised to  play one more time before we parted from each other. I returned home and went to bed.