ALICE:

I believe that my love toward my sweatheart will fade away as years go by.
That'why I experienced before.
I loved a gay who is great man when I was 20years old.
we loved each other very much but as time pass we fade away loving.
we dont konw eactly the reason and we break up.
and then I met my husbands
I loved my husnands for 3years but i don't love anymore
I only think we live together with friendship.

CORRECT:

I believe that my love toward my sweetheart will fade away as years go by.

>> The ?correct spelling of the word sweetheart.

I have experienced it before. I have loved a guy who was a great man when I was 20 years old. We loved each other very much but as time passed our love faded away.? We don't know exactly the reason and we broke up.

>>? The verb tense (past tense of the verb) just add -ed to the verb experience indicating the time of action in the past using the past perfect tense of the verb have experienced.

?After then, I met my husband. We have been in love with each other for 3 years.? But eventually we ended our relationship and remained friends.

>> Use the singular noun husband pertaining to only one.
>> Capitalize the beginning letter of the word in a sentence especially the nouns and the pronoun I.? It is usually capitalized.

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