Daine: I have to hurry when I go to school.
Correct: I have to hurry whenever I go to school.

Daine: I like to remember my books tittle.
Correct: I like to remember my books' titles.

*Be careful with your word spellings and apostrophe usage for possessive forms.

Daine:  I like to pack my snack. ~Correct!

Daine: I like to play tug of war. ~Correct!

Daine:  I like to share my pen and pencilcase.
Correct:  I like to share my pen and pencil case.

*Be careful with your word spacing.