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작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-02-23

2015/2/21

Today I bought a new pair of shoes.They are highlighted orange.
And blue too.I loved them,and then we were searching for my sisters shoes.
Then, my sister couldn't dicied. So I just went to the toy corner,and bought the life game. Then we ate dinner in the food court:hamburgurs.

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Today I bought a new pair of shoes.
They are highlighted orange. And blue too.
>> They are highlighted with orange and blue.
I loved them,and then we were searching for my sisters shoes.
>> I love them. Then we also searched for shoes for my sister.
Then, my sister couldn't dicied.
>> But my sister couldn't decide which one to pick.
So I just went to the toy corner,and bought the life game.
>> So I jsut went to the toy's section and bought the life game.
Then we ate dinner in the food court:hamburgurs.
>> Then we ate hamburgers for dinner in the food court.
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