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2015.2.21. saturday diary subway
작성자 : dav*** · 2015-02-21
Today I went subway station.
my dad buy the book my dad was happy Beacause thir are lots of book
We went the subway It was fun Beacuse it is fast and I like and I ate the hot food.
and I watched the tv thir is lion it was scard.
my dad buy the book my dad was happy Beacause thir are lots of book
We went the subway It was fun Beacuse it is fast and I like and I ate the hot food.
and I watched the tv thir is lion it was scard.
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Today I went subway station.
>> I went to a subway station today.
my dad buy the book my dad was happy Beacause thir are lots of book We went the subway It was fun Beacuse it is fast and I like and I ate the hot food.
>> My dad bought a book and he was happy because there were a lot of books. We rode the subway and it was fun because it was fast. I like the hot food that I ate there.
and I watched the tv thir is lion it was scard.
>> I watched a lion on TV and it was scary.
>> I went to a subway station today.
my dad buy the book my dad was happy Beacause thir are lots of book We went the subway It was fun Beacuse it is fast and I like and I ate the hot food.
>> My dad bought a book and he was happy because there were a lot of books. We rode the subway and it was fun because it was fast. I like the hot food that I ate there.
and I watched the tv thir is lion it was scard.
>> I watched a lion on TV and it was scary.