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작성자 : hsj***   ·   2015-02-17

February.17th.Tuseday
Title:New year's Day
This Thursday is New year's Day.
I went to my grandparent's house to meet relatives.
I met my cousins, uncle, aunt, grandmother, and grandparents.
I played with my tho cousins. One is 8 years old,
and the other is 4 years old.They were very cute.
And I also ate lots of food.They were really delicious.
Espicially, rice cake soup was very good.
Tomorrow,I will come back home.I'm sorry to come back home tomorrow.

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February.17th.Tuseday
>> February 17, Tuesday
Title: New year's Day
This Thursday is New year's day.
I went to my grandparent's house to meet relatives.
>> I went to my grand parent's house to meet some relatives.
I met my cousins, uncle, aunt, grandmother, and grandparents.
>> I met my cousins, uncle, aunt, and grandparents.
I played with my tho cousins. One is 8 years old,
and the other is 4 years old.They were very cute.
>> I played with my cousins. One is 8 years old, and the other is 4 years old. They were very cute.
And I also ate lots of food. They were really delicious.
Espicially, rice cake soup was very good.
>> Especially the rice cake soup, it was very good.
Tomorrow,I will come back home.I'm sorry to come back home tomorrow.
>> Tomorrow, I need to come back home. I feel sorry that I have to come back home tomorrow.
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