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Do you want to avoid oversleep?

작성자 : shi***   ·   2015-02-16

Do you want to avoid oversleeping?
I want to avoid oveersleeping. I think you will too. Oversleeping causes early death! I thought I should not be a person oversleep.
I thought some tips for not avoid oversleeping. We have to do it often as possible to make it nice and not hard.
First, I think you have to make your schedule and to set some alarm to catch it. People usely sleep lately at their vacation and weekends. Actually, I think there will be tons of people who are planning to sleep a lot during the Sul- Nal. This is also spring vacation, so you can test youself about you schedule.
Second, you need to have to punish youseltf if you don't wake yourself by right time. I think that is a nice thing to do, because if you punish yourself
you will know the things that you can do and can't do by yourself.
I think for third, you have to make youself make some schedule heavier than usual at weekend. Tehn, your brain will work like some days you work, or go to school.

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Do you want to avoid oversleeping?
I want to avoid oveersleeping.
>> I want to avoid oversleeping.
I think you will too. Oversleeping causes early death!
>> I think you will too  because oversleeping causes early death!
I thought I should not be a person oversleep.
>> I thought I should not be a person who oversleeps.
I thought some tips for not avoid oversleeping.
>> I thought of some tips to avoid oversleeping.
We have to do it often as possible to make it nice and not hard.
>> We have to do them as often as possible to make it easier.
First, I think you have to make your schedule and to set some alarm to catch it.
>> First, I think you have to make a schedule and set an alarm.
People usely sleep lately at their vacation and weekends.
>> People usually sleep late during their vacations and on the weekends.
Actually, I think there will be tons of people who are planning to sleep a lot during the Sul- Nal.
>> Actually, I think there are tons of people who are planning to sleep a lot during the Sul- Nal.
This is also spring vacation, so you can test youself about you schedule.
>> Also this spring vacation, so you can test yourself if you can follow the schedule.
Second, you need to have to punish youseltf if you don't wake yourself by right time.
>> Second, you have to punish yourself if you won't wake up on time.
I think that is a nice thing to do, because if you punish yourself you will know the things that you can do and can't do by yourself.
>> I think it is a good thing because you can train yourself to do good things.
I think for third, you have to make youself make some schedule heavier than usual at weekend.
>> Third, you have to make your schedule busier on the weekends.
Tehn, your brain will work like some days you work, or go to school.
>> Then your brain will function just like it does on weekdays.
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