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작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-02-16

I like candy.
1.Because I think it is more sweeter.
2.Because it has lot of shape that you can have fun with it.
3.Because they have lots of flavor.
4.Because there are lots of cool candy.
5.Because there are even big lolly pops so you can hang on it for a long time.

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I like candy.
>> I like candies.
1.Because I think it is more sweeter.
>>1.Because I think it is sweet.
2.Because it has lot of shape that you can have fun with it.
>> Because it is in different shapes and you can have fun with it.
3.Because they have lots of flavor.
>> Because they have different flavors.
4.Because there are lots of cool candy.
>> Because there are lots of cool candies.
5.Because there are even big lolly pops so you can hang on it for a long time.
>> Because there are even big lollipops that you can eat for a long time.

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