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작성자 : yoo*** · 2015-02-15
TITLE : Mr. Pizza
Today, I wanted to eat pizza. So, My mom bought HOME RUN BOX of Mr. pizza for me. My mom usually buy cheap pizza. But, today we ate pizzas, onion rings, fried shrimps and chickens. I ate three pieces of pizza, two onion rings, one fried shrimp and two pieces of chicken. My stomach were like balloon. I felt that today I ate much food. They were yummy^^
Today, I wanted to eat pizza. So, My mom bought HOME RUN BOX of Mr. pizza for me. My mom usually buy cheap pizza. But, today we ate pizzas, onion rings, fried shrimps and chickens. I ate three pieces of pizza, two onion rings, one fried shrimp and two pieces of chicken. My stomach were like balloon. I felt that today I ate much food. They were yummy^^
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TITLE : Mr. Pizza
Today, I wanted to eat pizza. So, my mom bought 'HOME RUN BOX' of Mr. pizza for me. My mom usually buy cheap pizza. But today we ate pizza, onion rings, fried shrimps and chicken. I ate three pieces/ slices of pizza, two onion rings, one fried shrimp and two pieces of chicken. They were yummy. My stomach looked like a balloon after I finished eating. I felt that I have eaten too much today. ^^
Today, I wanted to eat pizza. So, my mom bought 'HOME RUN BOX' of Mr. pizza for me. My mom usually buy cheap pizza. But today we ate pizza, onion rings, fried shrimps and chicken. I ate three pieces/ slices of pizza, two onion rings, one fried shrimp and two pieces of chicken. They were yummy. My stomach looked like a balloon after I finished eating. I felt that I have eaten too much today. ^^