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작성자 : seu***   ·   2015-02-16

1) When my friends shout in the class, they were on the same boat because soon the teacher would blame them.
2) I want to get rid of powerager toy.
3) When the teacher said to me that it was wrong, then i had second thoughts.
4) My mom has a apple of her eye.
5) When my girl friend was in front of the class, she was red in the face.

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SEUNGCHAN: 1) When my friends shout in the class, they were on the same boat because soon the teacher would blame them.

CORRECT: 1) When my friends shouted in class, they were in the same boat because the teacher would blame them soon.



EXPLANATION: Be mindful of the tense of your sentence. Also, the idiom is ????¨¡be in the same boat????¨?.



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SEUNGCHAN: 2) I want to get rid of powerager toy.



CORRECT: 2) I want to get rid of the Power Ranger toy.



EXPLANATION: ????¨¡The????¨? is used to refer to specific or particular nouns. Also, the first letter of proper nouns are capitalized.






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SEUNGCHAN: 3) When the teacher said to me that it was wrong, then i had second thoughts.



CORRECT: 3) When the teacher said to me that it was wrong, then I had second thoughts.



EXPLANATION: The pronoun ????¨¡I????¨? is always capitalized.



You can also write it like this:



3) When the teacher said to me that it was wrong, I started to have second thoughts about my idea.



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SEUNGCHAN: 4) My mom has a apple of her eye.



CORRECT: 4) My mom has an apple of her eye.



EXPLANATION: ????¨¡A/an????¨? is used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns



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SEUNGCHAN: 5) When my girl friend was in front of the class, she was red in the face.



***CORRECT!***



You can also write it like this:



5) When my girl friend stood in front of the class, she was red in the face.

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Hello, Seungchan! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well in relating these idioms to your own experiences! Keep it up!



I'll see you again next week! I hope you'll have a wonderful holiday with your family! Take care always!



Always cheering you on,



Teacher Kate

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