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작성자 : dan***   ·   2015-02-13

Here is the answer to my homework.

I learned that robot can have emotion.
Also, I learned about brother's love.
And I learned that all the people are not normal.

Please correct my sentences if I had write it wrong.

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DANIEL:

Here is the answer to my homework.

I learnedthat robot can have emotion.
Also, I learned about brother's love.
And I learned that all the people are not normal.


Please correct my sentences if I had write it wrong.


CORRECT:

Here is the answer to myhomework.

I learned that robots can have emotion.
I also learned about brother's love and that not all people are the same.

Please correct my sentences if I wrote it wrong.


EXPLANATION:

Some sentences were rephrased to be expressed clearly. AND is a conjunction   that connects two sentences. Simple past is used to express finished actions.

Hi Daniel!

It is nice to know that you are back! Thank you for sharing what you learned from the movie.Please take note of the little corrections to improve your writing  skill better.

Always supporting you,
Teacher Serene

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