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elsa
작성자 : bes*** · 2015-02-12
Idraw a picture . I painting a picture . I cut paper and i glueing paper.
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ELSA'S WORK:
Idraw a picture.
* I draw a picture.
* Don't forget your spacing per word.
I painting a picture.
* I'm painting a picture.
* Don't forget the be verb.
I cut paper and i glueing paper.
* I cut a paper and I'm gluing a paper.
* Be careful on your spellings.
COMMENT:
High five! Elsa very good! Thank you for sending me your homework. Keep up the good work and see you again next week. Take note of your corrections.
-Teacher Joanna
Idraw a picture.
* I draw a picture.
* Don't forget your spacing per word.
I painting a picture.
* I'm painting a picture.
* Don't forget the be verb.
I cut paper and i glueing paper.
* I cut a paper and I'm gluing a paper.
* Be careful on your spellings.
COMMENT:
High five! Elsa very good! Thank you for sending me your homework. Keep up the good work and see you again next week. Take note of your corrections.-Teacher Joanna