WOOHYUN: I'll tell you about Today. Today is the second last day?of 5th grade. We listened to student-teacher lesson at 1st, 2nd and 3rd class. Some lessons are hard, but it was fun. Then, We went to computer room and had a free time. It was fun to have a free time. We had a fun time. After we had free time, we came back to our class. Then we played dodge ball with 5th class. (my class is 1st class.) First, we are winning. We won the first game and the second game. Then, we lose the third game. But, we won the fourth game! So our class beat 5th class! It was very exciting. Then we ate lunch, and we went back home. Today was the best day ever!

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I'll tell you about what happened today. Today is the second to the last day?of 5th grade/as a 5th grader. We?listened to student-teacher lesson during our 1st, 2nd and 3rd classes. Some lessons were hard but they were fun. Then, we went to a computer room and had a free time. It was fun to have a free time. We had a fun time. After we had our free time, we came back to our class. Then, we played dodge ball with students from 5th class. (I belong to the 1st class). At first, we were winning. We won the first and second games. Then, we lost the third game. But, we won the fourth game! So, our class beat the 5th class! It was very exciting. Then, we ate lunch and we went back home. Today was the best day ever!

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