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작성자 : had***   ·   2015-02-09

Because dream makes us try to do. And if we don,t have a dream, we can be foolish.

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Because dream makes us try to do. And if we don't have a dream, we can be foolish.


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Thank you for making your homework, Eric. I appreciate your ideas. ^^

Next time, let's practice making longer sentences. Let's also fix your sentence here.


Why it is important to have dreams in life?

   ~ Our dreams make us  stay motivated and try harder to achieve it. If we don't have dreams, our  desires will less likely to happen.


It is short, Eric but the thought is there. Always practice writing and study well. Reach all your dreams. Take care always. See you on Wednesday. ^^


~Teacher Cassie

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