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Pocket money VS just money

작성자 : shi***   ·   2015-02-06

Actually these days someone gets pocket moneys are more stri about buying nice things.
Pocket money is earned buy itself. When he or her is not good at studying, fight with friends and do somethig bad, they don't get it from their parents. To make sure that children is having Pocket money, not just money, we have to do such a lot things.
First, make your child know the reason he or whe is getting pocket money.
That will make those money more vaulable. Secnd, Start from the lowest pocket money. When a year is past and your child grow, give them little more money and say that he or she is grown and did nice things with money, they wil have more.
Your child will probably will be strict about using money like their parents.
Last, seperate money they will use. one will be money they will save, and other group (group 2) into money they will use buying toys.
Make your child to earn (group 2) their selves. ( doing chores, work hardly....)
Well I hope your child will listen to this rules.

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Actually these days someone gets pocket moneys are more stri about buying nice things.

*Actually, these days people who receive pocket money are more strict about buying things.

Pocket money is earned buy itself. When he or her is not good at studying, fight with friends and do somethig bad, they don't get it from their parents.

*Pocket money is earned by someone by itself. When he or she is not good at studying and he or she is having fights with friends and often do something bad, they will not receive pocket money from their parents.

To make sure that children is having Pocket money, not just money, we have to do such a lot things.

*To make sure that children receives pocket money and not just money, we have to do such things:

First, make your child know the reason he or whe is getting pocket money.

*First, make your child know the reason why he or she is receiving pocket money.

That will make those money more vaulable. Secnd, Start from the lowest pocket money.

*That will make them value money more. Secondly, start from giving them a low amount of pocket money.

When a year is past and your child grow, give them little more money and say that he or she is grown and did nice things with money, they wil have more.

*When a year had passed and the child had grown, increase his pocket money but not on a very high amount. And tell him that if he use his money in a good way, he will receive more.

Your child will probably will be strict about using money like their parents.

Last, seperate money they will use. one will be money they will save, and other group (group 2) into money they will use buying toys.

*Lastly, divide the pocket money that they have. Half of it will be saved and the other half is for buying things or toys that they like.


Make your child to earn (group 2) their selves. ( doing chores, work hardly....)

*Make your child earn his other half of money by themselves. They can earn it by helping with the house chores and making them work hard.

Well I hope your child will listen to this rules.

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