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Why natural resources important?

작성자 : slj***   ·   2015-02-04

Why natural resources important?
First,we use natural resources make elactricity.
Second,we eat food or wear clothes.
Last,we make energy.
For these reasons natural resources important.

답변

ANDREW: Whynatural resources important?
CORRECT: Why are naturalresources important?
EXPLANATION: A sentences won't becomplete without a subject and a verb.

ANDREW: First,weuse natural resources make elactricity.
CORRECT: First, weneed natural resources to generate electricity.
EXPLANATION: Be careful with thespelling of the word ELECTRICITY. Sentence was rephrased.

ANDREW: Second,weeat food or wear clothes.
CORRECT: Second, the food we eatand the materials for the clothes that we wear are from naturalresources.
EXPLANATION: Practice to expressyourself in form of complete sentences to share a complete thought.

ANDREW: Last,wemake energy.
CORRECT: Lastly, it gives us energy.
EXPLANATION: LASTLY is an adverb thatmeans finally.

ANDREW: Forthese reasons natural resources important.
CORRECT: Naturalresources are important because of these reasons.
EXPLANATION: Sentence was rephrased toplace a verb on it.


Good Day Andrew!

Thank you for submitting your homework!I am quite happy to see how you exert effort to share your writingskill. I hope that you will keep on doing your homework so you canimprove in English writing more.

Good job!

Always,
Teacher Serene ^_^

     
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