ANDREW: Whynatural resources important?
CORRECT: Why are naturalresources important?
EXPLANATION: A sentences won't becomplete without a subject and a verb.
ANDREW: First,weuse natural resources make elactricity.
CORRECT: First, weneed natural resources to generate electricity.
EXPLANATION: Be careful with thespelling of the word ELECTRICITY. Sentence was rephrased.
ANDREW: Second,weeat food or wear clothes.
CORRECT: Second, the food we eatand the materials for the clothes that we wear are from naturalresources.
EXPLANATION: Practice to expressyourself in form of complete sentences to share a complete thought.
ANDREW: Last,wemake energy.
CORRECT: Lastly, it gives us energy.
EXPLANATION: LASTLY is an adverb thatmeans finally.
ANDREW: Forthese reasons natural resources important.
CORRECT: Naturalresources are important because of these reasons.
EXPLANATION: Sentence was rephrased toplace a verb on it.
Good Day Andrew!
Thank you for submitting your homework!I am quite happy to see how you exert effort to share your writingskill. I hope that you will keep on doing your homework so you canimprove in English writing more.
Good job!
Always,
Teacher Serene ^_^