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작성자 : yoo*** · 2015-02-04
TITLE : Dodgeball game
Today, I played dodgeball hame with my classmates in P.E. class.
We played nice game. When I cathed the ball, I came down.
My friend said "That were hollywood action!"
My classmates were fun. Me too.
Today, I played dodgeball hame with my classmates in P.E. class.
We played nice game. When I cathed the ball, I came down.
My friend said "That were hollywood action!"
My classmates were fun. Me too.
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TITLE : Dodgeball game
Today, I played dodgeball hame with my classmates in P.E. class.
>> Today, I played dodgeball with my classmates during our P.E. class.
We played nice game.
>> We had a nice game.
When I cathed the ball, I came down.
>> When the ball hit me, I went down.
My friend said "That were hollywood action!"
>> My friend said "It's like hollywood acting!"
My classmates were fun.
>> My classmates had fun.
Me too.
>> So did I.
Today, I played dodgeball hame with my classmates in P.E. class.
>> Today, I played dodgeball with my classmates during our P.E. class.
We played nice game.
>> We had a nice game.
When I cathed the ball, I came down.
>> When the ball hit me, I went down.
My friend said "That were hollywood action!"
>> My friend said "It's like hollywood acting!"
My classmates were fun.
>> My classmates had fun.
Me too.
>> So did I.