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작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-02-03

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Q:Do you sometimes feel that you should turn over a new leaf? If so, what do you want to change about your life?

A:Yes. When I was 6, I went to the supermarket with mom. I was looking at some breads. Then suddenly, my mother was gone! I was so surprised. I wish I have known that I have to wait in that place. But I didn't. I wish I can go back in time and do right thing.

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Hello Woohyun! Thank you for submitting your homework on Talk Fun! Here's your correction.



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About you

Q:Do you sometimes feel that you should turn over a new leaf? If so, what do you want to change about your life?

A:Yes. When I was 6, I went to the supermarket with mom. I was looking at some breads. Then suddenly, my mother was gone! I was so surprised. I wish I have known that I have to wait in that place. But I didn't. I wish I can go back in time and do right thing.


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CORRECT:


A:Yes. When I was six, I went to the supermarket with mom. I was looking at some breads. Then suddenly, my mother was gone! I was so surprised. I wish I have known that I have to wait in that place. But I didn't. I wish I could go back in time and do the right thing.



EXPLANATION:

Take note of the highlighted words to your composition.  There's just a few changes. The number can be written in words too. In using modal verbs, consider the uses of these modal verbs to add a strong expression of the statement. " I wish I could go back in time and do  the right thing."


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Mostly, thank you for sharing your opinion Woohyun. You were able to construct your own composition and keep it up! See you again in the class!

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