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My weekend
작성자 : ysm*** · 2015-02-03
I made a robot in my weekend. it was fun and easy. In the evening I saw Asian soccer game on the television. in end of the game Korea lose. but I'm proud of Korean soccer team.
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| My Weekend | |
| I made a robot on my weekend. It was fun and easy. In the evening, I saw Asian soccer game on the television. In end of the game, Korea lose but I'm proud of Korean soccer team. | |
Colin: it was fun and easy.
Correct: It was fun and easy.
Colin: in end of the game Korea lose. but I'm proud of Korean soccer team.
Correct: In end of the game, Korea lose but I'm proud of Korean soccer team.
EXPLANATION:
Please capitalize the first letter of the word after every sentence.
Well done, Colin! Thank you for submitting your homework. See you tomorrow.
Teacher Sena