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my opinion of censorship

작성자 : seh***   ·   2015-02-03

I think censorship has to be justified appropriately.
There are a lot of problems with justifying censorship. People’s ignorance will increase, and it’ll limit the freedom of speech. But, if censorship has justified, the children won’t get the information that is not really necessarily good. In the other way, parents will have a difficulty in moderation of children. So I think censorship has to be justified, but lower degree.

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DANA: I think censorship has to be justified appropriately.
There are a lot of problems with justifying censorship. People's ignorance will increase, and it'll limit the freedom of speech. But, if censorship has justified, the children won't get the information that is not really necessarily good. In the other way, parents will have a difficulty in moderation of children. So I think censorship has to be justified, but lower degree.

correct: I think censorship has to be justified appropriately. There are a lot of problems with justifying censorship. People's ignorance will increase and it will limit the freedom of speech. But, if censorship has been justified, the children won't get the information that is not really necessarily good. In the other way, parents will have a difficulty in moderating their children. So, I think censorship has to be justified, but in lower degree.

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