In the world, there are many kinds of careers and everyone is thinking about their future. There are also many activities. Many people go on a trip.
A space is very big place. It is exciting and amazing.

Hi Hoony,

Frist of all, thank you for doing your homework and sharing your thoughts. I would like you to take note of the corrections above and study how I changed your sentences. You have to be careful on how you answer a question. Answering is not just saying your words. You also have to make a complete thought so the person reading your composition will understand it. So please check your composition and study it. See you in the class.

Teacher Julie