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작성자 : ldh***   ·   2015-02-02

(1) I will make more delicious dinner for my kid.
(2) I will go to camping with my kid more often.
(3) I will not yell to my kid when I'm upset.
(4) I will not give stress with learning to my kid.
(5) I will make more time with my kid.

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Nicole's homework:

(1) I will make more delicious dinner for my kid.
(2) I will go to camping with my kid more often.
(3) I will not yell to my kid when I'm upset.
(4) I will not give stress with learning to my kid.
(5) I will make more time with my kid.

correct:
(1) I will make more delicious dinner for my kid/daughter.
(2) I will go to camping with my kid/daughter more often.
(3) I will not yell to my kid/daughter when I'm upset.
(4) I will not give stress with learning to my kid.

*I didn't understand your sentence here. But you can rephrase it like this:
- I will not stress my daughter just to learn.

(5) I will make more time with my kid/daughter.

Explanation:
All your sentences are correct except to number 4. Since you are the only child you can use "daughter".

Note:
Thank you for submitting your homework Nicole you're getting better now just keep on practicing and make sure that, when you make a sentence it has a subject and a complete thought. So, the reader will understand what you are saying. AJA! ^^

~ Teacher Gee <3

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