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작성자 : csu***   ·   2015-01-30

Iwould like to take a vacation to go museum because it have many things.
When I go on vacation, I always look for freind.
I always do my best when I am learned a lesson.

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KEVIN: Iwould like to take a vacation to go museum because it have many things. When I go on vacation, I always look for freind. I always do my best when I am learned a lesson.

CORRECT:

I would like to take a vacation to go to a museum because it has many things. when I go on a vacation, I always look for a friend. I always do my best when I am learning a lesson.

>>A space should be placed between words. Be mindful of the correct spelling of words. Don't forget to use prepositions and articles. For present progressive tense, follow this pattern : 'be verb + verb + ing'

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