===CORRECTIONS===

Daine: I can't rive bicycle.
Correct: I can't to drive a bicycle.
            I don't know how to drive a bicycle.
Explanation: Be careful with your word spellings and please do use articles as determiners for your subjects in the sentence.

Daine:  I don't have a lost bike. ~ Correct!

Daine: I have a contact number it is 010-5152-2658. ~Correct!

Daine: My favorite peoples are my family.
Correct: My favorite people are my family.
Explanation: No need to add -s in the word "people" because it is already in its plural form from its base or singular form "person".

Daine: My friends have a missing item it is a eraser.
Correct: My friend has a missing item it's an eraser. 
Explanation: For subject-verb agreement rule: Every singular subject requires a singular verb while plural subject requires a plural verb. ARTICLES plays an important role in a sentence for they emphasize the subject or the direct object. Use A for initial consonant letters or sounds, An for initial consonant letters or sounds and The for specific words or proper nouns.

Daine: the first the lost bike was acident take care and see you later.
Correct: The first "The Lost Bike" homework was an accident. Take Care and See you later.
Explanation: Always start your sentences in a capitalized letter, enclose the title of a subject with the use of quotation marks to give emphasize and always do check your word spellings.

                                        ===NOTES===

Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well, I hope that you're going to apply what is being asked on you with the following corrections for the improvement of your sentence constructions. Thank you! I'll see you in class!

~Teacher Carrie